题目内容
【题目】 时光飞逝,转眼间初中生活即将结束。在你的学习或生活中,你一定取得了不少进步,比如良好性格的形成、学习方法的掌握、生活技能的获得等。请根据以上内容,结合所给要点提示,以“The Biggest Progress I Have Made”为题,写一篇100词左右的短文。
要点:1.你取得了哪方面的进步; 2.你是如何取得这一进步的; 3.你的感想。
要求:1.短文须包括所有要点提示,语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥; 2.题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇:overcome;be afraid of;the school art festival;congratulate
The Biggest Progress I Have Made
Everyone has made a lot of progress in junior high school life.
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【答案】例文
The Biggest Progress I Have Made
Everyone has made a lot of progress in junior high school life. The biggest progress I have ever made is that I have overcome shyness.
I used to be so shy that I was afraid of speaking in public. Last year, my teacher asked me to sing a song at the school art festival because of my sweet voice. I was afraid and wanted to give up. But my teacher encouraged me and helped me practice again and again. The moment came, I remembered my teacher’s words: Believe in yourself! Everything went well. When my classmates congratulated me, my eyes were filled with tears.
At that moment, I was so proud of myself. From then on, I have changed a lot and became brave and outgoing.
【解析】
题干解读:这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“The Biggest Progress I Have Made”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺,语意连贯,紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡,要注意涵盖所给提示。