Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是张伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你的寒假生活，请给他回一封电子邮件。80词左右

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

Thank you for your e-mail. You asked me my winter holiday. Let me tell you something about it.

I really had a busy and happy winter holiday. I did my homework and helped my parents with the housework every day. I like drawing so much that I spent lots of time drawing pictures and read books about drawing every day. I sometimes went to the library to read books and surfed the internet.During the Spring Festival, i visited my grandparents, friends and relatives. We really had a great time together. I prepared for the new lessons and read English,too. I really enjoyed my winter holiday.

Yours,

Zhang Wei

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信，要注意格式。本文时态是一般过去时，人称为第一人称。写作过程中注意人称和时态保持一致。注意运用连词使语意连贯，具有逻辑性。

写作亮点：本篇文章采用了大量的短语和句式，为文章增色不少。比如: I like drawing so much that I spent lots of time drawing pictures and read books about drawing every day. 我喜欢画画，所以我每天花大量的时间画画和阅读有关画画的书籍。在学习中要注意总结，将所学句型和短语运用到写作当中去。