Question

8．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic“My Colorful Childhood”（以“我的美好童年”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格．）
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．）
The following is for reference only．（以下表达仅供参考）
•I dream of…
•It is exciting/necessary/helpful to…

Answer 1

分析 本文为记叙文，要求记叙自己的童年．人称为第一人称为主，时态为一般过去时为主．根据表达方面的提示，可以知道写作要点为：1，童年的经历；2，童年回忆的感受．考生需结合自己的童年回忆来说．
重要短语和词汇：
curious 好奇心强的
imaginative 富有想象力的
architect 建筑师
cellar 地窖
make out 制定
lift up 举起
shovel 铲子
by hand 用手
underground 地下地，在地下
disappointed 失望的
look back 回顾
高分句型：
句型一：
What①impressed me most is that I drew one house which②was like a big cellar．
让我印象最深刻的是我画了一个像个大地窖的房子．
①what引导主语从句，在句中充当主语．②which引导限制性定语从句
句型二：
We began to dig，hoping that we could make out a house underground．
我们开始挖，希望能挖出一个地下的房子．
hoping 原形为hope，此处用现在分词作伴随状语
句型三：
It wasn’t such a bad experience but a funny one．
这不是很坏的经历，但是（反而）非常有趣．
否定词+but 双重否定表示肯定  此用法用来强调but后面的内容．

解答 My Colorful Childhood
When I was a little girl，I was very curious and imaginative．I had so many dreams．I dreamt of being an architect as well as a great painter．What impressed me most is that I drew one house which was like a big cellar．【高分句型一】After making out the house model，I asked my brother for help．We lifted up with shovels on our shoulders and went out to the field．We began to dig，hoping that we could make out a house underground．【高分句型二】After about half and a hour，we stopped digging since we found that it was too hard to make out a house underground by hand．That made us really disappointed．（童年的经历）
Nowadays，I would laugh whenever I look back on this experience．It wasn’t such a bad experience but a funny one．【高分句型三】I still dream to be an architect and hope my dream will come true one day．（童年回忆的感受）

点评 题目要求不限制考生的想象力，考生可以选一个印象最深刻的经历，围绕主题进行叙述，写出真情实感．