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4.以"My Plan at the Weekend"为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文.
提示:1我是杨帆.
2星期六上午去商店购物,买一些衣服.
3星期六下午做作业,五点与朋友们一起骑自行车.
4星期六晚上七点吃晚饭,然后看电视,.十点上床睡觉.
5星期日与父母一起爬长城.
My Plan at the Weekend
                                                                  

分析 这是一篇给材料作文,本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥.写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上,注意方位词的使用;结合材料内容,可知本文主要是用一般现在时态,第一人称进行叙述,注意主谓一致问题.语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯.适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.
高分句型:
①I have  many things to do at the weekend.周末我有许多事情要做.句子中to do作定语修饰things.
②I am going to do some shopping and buy some clothes on Saturday morning.星期六上午我要去商店购物,买一些衣服.句子中be going to do sth表示将要做某事.

解答 My Plan at the Weekend
   I'm Yang Fan.I have  many things to do at the weekend(高分句型).(引出话题)I am going to do some shopping and buy some clothes on Saturday morning(高分句型).I'm going to do my homework  and go cycling with my friends at five o'clock in the afternoon.On Saturday evening,I'm going to have supper at seven and watch TV after supper.I'm going to go to bed at ten o'clock.I'm very happy on Sunday because I'm going to  walk up the Great Wall with my parents.(具体介绍周末计划)
   This is my plan at the weekend.I'm going to be very busy!What about you?(总结)

点评 这篇短文使用的句式短语较为简单,如go shopping去购物;do my homework做作业;watch TV看电视;go to bed上床睡觉等.但是通过一些连词,如:and和,并且;after在…之后等的使用,以及多种句式的变换应用,使得文章避免单纯的重复,使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚.让我们对我的周末计划有了一个比较全面的了解,不失为一篇上等作文.

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