Question

【题目】请以My Future Life为题写一篇80词左右的作文, 畅想一下你未来的生活。
提示语: grow up, raise one's family, achieve one's goal

Answer 1

【答案】My Future Life
I want to grow up as soon as possible. When I grow up, I can do many things that I can't do now. However, at the same time, I don't know what my future life would be. Look around myself, some people are busy working for having enough food to eat and live better, some are achieving every goal that they make, some may live in the poor situation. I don't know what kind of life l would have in the future. But I know that everyone's life is in their hands. So I will try my best to work hard for a better future life.
【解析】这是一篇以My Future Life为题的命题作文。
写作步骤：
一、写作内容包括：
（1）我想快点长大，当我长大时，我可以做很多现在不能做的事情。I want to grow up as soon as possible. When I grow up, I can do many things that I can't do now.
（2）周边人的现状：有些人忙于工作为了有足够多的食物或活得更好。some people are busy working for having enough food to eat and live better；有些努力达成他们制作的每个目标。some are achieving every goal that they make；有些过着贫穷的生活。some may live a poor life。
（3）自己对未来生活的想法。我认为每个人的生活掌握在自己手中。 I know that everyone's life is in their hands；我会尽力努力工作为了更好的未来。I will try my best to work hard for a better future life.
二、连句成篇，注意句子的前后连贯性，可适当应用一些连词如and，when，so等等。