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【题目】作文:以“A computer ”为题写一篇短文,词数70-80.

提示词: have a computer do my homework go online play games send emails too much be bad for

【答案】

A computer

I have a computer.I often do my homework after school.I sometimes use the computer to help me do my homework.I often go online on weekends and I sometimes buy things online because it is very easy.On Saturday I often play games with my friends on the Internet.In the evening I often send emails to my friends.I think that I shouldnt spend too much time in playing games on the computer.It is bad for my eyes.

【解析】

试题分析:本文叙述了自己在平时用电脑做一些什么事情,所以句子的主语用第一人称单数,句子的时态用一般现在时,根据提示词写出要点,所写的句子应该符合英语语法,要用一些高级词汇

写作亮点:短文用了一些短语和句式,如:do ones homework做作业;help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事;play games with sb和某人一起玩游戏;spend+时间段+in doing sth做某事花费了很长的时间。用了that引导的宾语从句增加了文章的亮点。

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