Question

11．昨天是端午节，学校组织我班同学去幸福养老院慰问老人，给老人送温暖，请你给校刊写篇文章，记叙当天的活动．
主要内容：
1．上午与老人们一起谈笑风声的包粽子．
2．下午给老人们表演节目并与他们谈心．
3．谈谈你对此次活动的感想．
要求：
1．按所给提示可适当发挥，无需标题．
2．词数：80-100
参考词汇：端午节Dragon Boat Festival  粽子zongzi  养老院nursing houses．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I think it necessary for us to learn how to respect and take care of others，especially the old．
句子结构为"think it+形容词+for sb to do sth"，其中"it"为形式宾语，代指后面的不定式短语．句中短语有"take care of sb 照顾某人"．这句话意为：我认为对我们来说学习怎么尊敬和照顾他人，特别是老年人，很必要．
高分句型二：
On the other hand，if everyone shows the love to others，the world will become more peaceful and warmer．
句中"if everyone shows the love to others"为"if"引导的条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"原则．句中短语有"on the other hand 另一方面"．这句话意为：另一方面，如果每个人都对他人献出自己的爱，世界将会变得更安宁、更温暖．

解答 Yesterday was the Dragon Boat Festival，we went to Happiness Nursing House to help the old people．I had a happy day．（开篇点题）
When we arrived，we were warmly welcomed by the old people．First we introduced ourselves．Then we were packing Zongzi together with the old，talking and laughing．After lunch，we performed and sang songs with them happily．Finally all the old people said goodbye to us at the gate．（当天的活动）
At the end of the day，we were very happy because we did a good deed．I think it necessary for us to learn how to respect and take care of others，especially the old．【高分句型一】It is also a traditional virtue to help the old．On the other hand，if everyone shows the love to others，the world will become more peaceful and warmer．【高分句型二】（我的感受）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．