题目内容
【题目】最近你的朋友Tom在他的微博上发了这样一个帖子:
These days, I feel my school life is very boring. Every day I do the same things—taking lessons, doing exercises and taking exams. Every day I take the same way—classroom, playground and dining hall. Every day the teachers say the same thing to us: Study hard and try to enter a better high school. . . |
假如你是Jim,请你给Tom回个帖子。根据中文大意和英文提示,写出意思连贯,符合逻辑,不少于80词的短文。请不要写出你真实的校名和姓名。内容要求:
①针对Tom的困惑,先谈谈你的看法;
②结合自己的学习生活实践为他提几条合理的建议;
③ 最后送上你的祝愿。
Hi Tom,
How are you? I saw the problem in your weibo. I can understand your feelings very well.……
Love,
Jim
【答案】Hi Tom,
How are you? I saw the problem in your weibo. I can understand your feelings very well.
As junior 3 students, it is true that our life is a little boring. But I also think it's a kind of experience that we teenagers have to go through. We can do something to make our school life easier and more colorful.
Here are some pieces of advice for you. First, we can do some sports to make us healthy. Second, it’s useful for us to do some reading or listen to some music after school. Last but not least, we can spend some time talking with our teachers, families or friends. I think they will bring us happiness.
I hope my advice will give you some help, and you can enjoy your school life better.
Love,
Jim
【解析】这是一篇材料作文,根据微博上的帖子写一个回帖。在帖子中Tom感觉学校生活很无聊,每天做同样的事情,重复着同样的路线,听着老师每天重复的唠叨,因此希望学校的生活变得丰富多彩。写回帖时要紧扣要点,使用正确的句子表示清楚,注意时态,语态,语言的表达要符合英语的习惯。
写作步骤:
一、阅读提示,弄清所有信息,明确写作要点。
1.针对帖子谈看法,表示理解。I saw the problem in your weibo. I can understand your feelings very well
2.描述一下初三的学校生活确实是这样,但是可以更丰富多彩。As junior 3 students, it is true that our life is a little boring. But I also think it's a kind of experience that we teenagers have to go through. We can do something to make our school life easier and more colorful.
3.提出几条建议:a.多运动;b.多读书听音乐;c.多与老师和同学们交流。 Here are some pieces of advice for you. First, we can do some sports to make us healthy. Second, it’s useful for us to do some reading or listen to some music after school. Last but not least, we can spend some time talking with our teachers, families or friends. I think they will bring us happiness.
4.送上祝愿。I hope my advice will give you some help, and you can enjoy your school life better.
二、根据要点,写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。