Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim 正在进行一项家庭电脑使用情况调查。请你根据以下表格提示内容，给Jim 写一封电子邮件介绍自己和家人使用电脑的情况。不少于60 词，电子邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

There are four people in my family and we have got two computers at home.

My parents share one, and my sister shares one with me. My father often reads the news on the Internet for half an hour. My mother often checks her email and talks to her students. It usually takes two hours. My sister often draws on the computer for half an hour. I usually do my homework on the computer for an hour.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇书信作文。你的英国笔友Jim 正在进行一项家庭电脑使用情况调查，要求根据提示内容，给Jim写一封电子邮件介绍自己和家人使用电脑的情况。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。