Question

【题目】书面表达（满分10分）

在我们的生活中，有很多东西对我们是很重要的。比如爱、帮助、友谊、家人、朋友、健康、运动、梦想、爱好、音乐、读书等。请根据提示，结合自身的感受，以______________Is Very Important in My Life为题写一篇文章。

要求：1、补全所给的题目，用英语写一篇短文，词数不少于80词

2、紧扣主题，适当发挥；

3、语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，注意时态

4、文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计算

____________ Is Very Important My Life

Answer 1

【答案】

My Classmate Is Very Important in My Life

I deeply believe that everyone has their most important people in their lifetime. For me, that's my classmate, Tom.

I still remember that once my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks. While I was worrying about school work at home, my classmate Tom came to help me. He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. I was glad that I caught up with my classmates.

From then on, we became best friends. I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于开放性文体，能够很大程度上调动学生的想象空间，学生可以结合自己的经历来写，首先每个人心中都有一个重要的人物，结合自己的一次经历，叙述他是如何帮助我的，为什么留下了最深的印象。最后对自己所经历的事情的感受进行描写。

写作亮点：短文用了短语和句式。如：I deeply believe that everyone has their most important people in their lifetime. I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed.等，文章还用了一些连词如that，because，until等，增加了文章的亮点。