题目内容
【题目】 美丽的世界源于人们的辛勤创造, 所以劳动是最美的, 是最光荣的。请你说说劳动的好处。
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【答案】例文
As we know, labor brings us all, there is labor, is to return, no pains, no gains! Without labor, there would be no colorful world. Labor not only keeps you healthy and strong, but also brings you happiness. So I think it is good for students to do some labor.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是话题作文,文中介绍了劳动的好处,根据提供的要点可自由发挥。
2.例文解读:本文采用的主要人称是第三人称,时态采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态,并保持主谓一致。句子通顺,逻辑性强。
3.高分亮点:
短语:keep healthy保持强壮;not only…but also不但……而且;be good for对……有好处。
句子:there would be no colorful world句中用的是there be句型;So I think it is good for students to do some labor句中由that引导的宾语从句,引导词that已省略。