Question

“岁岁春草生，踏青二三月”。春天来了,万物复苏,正是郊游踏青的好时节。

假如你是光明中学八（7）班的Maria，请你用英语和我们分享一下你上次郊游的难忘经历吧！

要求：条理清楚, 语言表达准确，行文连贯，段落分明, 书写整洁规范，80词左右。

 

Answer 1

Last Sunday, our classmates and I went to the People’s Park to have a trip. The weather was very nice that day, and all of us were very excited. We started from our school on the early morning by bus. We took some water, fruits and snacks with us. In the park, we saw many beautiful flowers with different colors. There were many people there. Some of us went fishing, some had boating, and others flew kites. In the afternoon, we played some games together. We all had a good time there. I think it is a good time to relax ourselves.

【解析】

试题分析：这是篇命题作文。要写一篇关于郊游的经历，是对已经发生了的事情的描述，所以注意时态要用过去时。写作时要注意文章的条理要清楚，表达要准确流利，尤其注意主谓一致和时态的一致性。文中可适当加入一些承接性的句子和短语来加强逻辑性。

【亮点说明】这篇作文条理清楚，表达准确流利。文章使用了一些很有用的表达方式，例如：our classmates and I went to the People’s Park to have a trip我和同学们去人民公园旅行；have a trip旅行。on the early morning在清晨；In the park, we saw many beautiful flowers with different colors.在公园，我们看到了不同颜色的美丽的花；with different colors不同颜色的。have a good time玩得开心。

考点：提纲作文。