Question

书面表达(本题满分20分)

请根据下表内的提示内容写一篇英语短文介绍一位你的新同学Sam。说说他学习生活中的优点以及存在的问题，并对他今后的学习生活提些建议。

个人情况	优点	缺点
性格品质及素养	自信……、 有耐心、 乐于助人、 ……	喜欢捉弄别人
团结合作与交流	有团队合作精神	做与众不同的事情
爱好	看电视，读书，最喜欢的中国作家是莫言，喜欢绿色……	因为看电视太多，视力较差
愿望	在中国交很多的朋友，成为一名著名的作家
你的建议	1.空余时间里多和同学交谈……

写作要求：

1．要点齐全，省略号要适当发挥至少一句话。

2．词数90 左右。

3．条理清晰，语意连贯，字迹工整。

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Answer 1

This term we have a new classmates, his name is Sam. He is very confident. He thinks he can do things well and successfully. He is also very patient and ready to help others. He studies very hard. But he likes making fun of others. He likes to work with others but he usually does work differently with others.

He likes watching TV and reading books. He likes Mo Yan, a Chinese writer best. Blue is his favorite color. But his eye sight is very poor because he watches TV too much.

He hope to make many friends in China and be a famous writer in future.

I think he should talk more with his classmates in spare time and not watch TV too much.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据所给提示写一篇作文。本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

考点：提示性作文