Question

根据中文提示写一篇关于我们校园的文章，介绍你的学校生活，词数80左右。

１ 我们学校大约有500个学生。

２ 同学们之间友好团结，互相帮助，校园生活丰富多彩。

３ 每年我们有两个假期，寒假和暑假，我们的假期比美国学生少两个月。

４ 学校里有一个小公园，里面有来自世界各地的名胜古迹的模型。它们小但很精致。

５ 它是我理想的学校，我很喜欢。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

There are about five hundred students. The students are friendly and helpful and our school life is colourful. Every year we have two holidays, the summer holiday and winter holiday. We have two months fewer holidays than the American students. There is a park in it. There are many models of places of interest from all over the world. They are small but wonderful. It is my ideal school and I like it very much.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让介绍校园和学校生活的文章。本篇文章逐一介绍了所列举的内容，与我们的校园生活很相符。另外，写作时，还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者讲述了他们在学校的校园生活情况。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如We have two months fewer holidays than the American students. There is a park in it. There are many models of places of interest from all over the world.等。

考点：提纲类作文。