题目内容
12．假如你看到或听到下面这则消息，请以李华的名义，给你的英国笔友DAVY发一封电子邮件，告诉他这个感人的故事及你的感受．
分析 【高分句型一】
As a student，I should①learn from them and ②try to help others作为一名学生，我应该向他们学习尽力去帮助他人．
①learn from sb 向某人学习．
②try to do sth 尽力做某事
【高分句型二】
If everyone would like to do that，the whole world will be full of love如果每个人都愿意那样做，世界将充满爱、
if引导的条件状语从句．
解答 Hi Davy，
I"d like to tell you a true story．Li Baoyuan，a student of Hebei Agricultural University came from a poor family．Unluckily，he became ill and died in 1996．However，all his 26 classmates decided to help Baoyuan's parents．In the past fifteen years，they've sent 15 money orders and 56 letters to his parents．（真实的故事）And their true love is still going on…I'm really moved．（感受）As a student，I should learn from them and try to help others．【高分句型一】（学到了什么）If everyone would like to do that，the whole world will be full of love!【高分句型二】What do you think of it？Please write soon!
Li Hua
点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．
One day，when she was walking in a forest，she saw a butterfly caught in a bush．No matter how hard it tried to free itself，it failed every time．The little girl was very sorry for it．She ran to set it free at once．（57）C．And it changed into a beautiful fairy（仙女） instead．
The beautiful fairy said to the girl，"I must die without your help．Because of your kindness，you can get whatever you want from me．"You may not believe that the girl wanted neither gold nor houses．She just wanted to be happy most．The fairy said something in a low voice in her ear．（58）A
From then on，the little girl was happy every day．She was kind to everyone around her．When other people asked her the secret of her happiness，she smiled and said，"（59）B．"
（60）E，all her neighbors stood around her bed and asked her why she was so happy．They were afraid that the secret would die with her．The lovely old lady smiled and said，"The good fairy told me that you needed me，no matter who you are．"
| A．Then she disappeared B．The secret of my happiness is that I listened to a good fairy C．But to her great surprise，the butterfly didn't fly away D．So she wanted to be loved very much E．When she was very old and dying |
Stampedes（踩踏），earthquakes and fires are the main accidents at school．
（77）D When students around you begin to push，just stand there and try to hold onto something．If you fall down in the crowd，move to one side and protect your head with your hands around．
When earthquakes happen，you can get under a desk quickly and hold on．（78）B If you are outdoors，find a place away from buildings，trees，and power lines （电线）．
（79）C It's better to put something over your mouth and nose．In this way，you won't breathe（呼吸） in smoke．Many people die in a fire，not because of the fire but smoke．It makes them enough and they can't breathe．That's very dangerous!（80）G Then you can breathe some fresh air．
| A．Humans are very afraid of accidents． B．It'll protect you from falling things． C．When there's a fire，leave the classroom quickly． D．A stampede always happens in crowded places． E．We should ask for help． F．In China，safety education is becoming more and more important now． G．So when you want to get out，you should make yourself close to the floor． |