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6．同学们，我们已经过了多年的学校生活，学校生活有时是快乐的，有时是忙碌的，有时是…假设你是Li Tao，请以My school life为题，给你在美国的网友Jack 写-封电子邮件，介绍你的学习生活，信的开头和结尾已给出，字数约80字左右，文中不可出现真实的人名、地点、校名等．Dear Jack，
Hi，I'm Li Tao，a student of Class 6，Grade 9．My school life is…
very interesting．
Classes begin at 8：00 am．I have four classes in the morning．In the afternoon，I have two classes．I study Chinese，math，English and some other subjects．English is my favorite subject and I often speak English with my classmates．I also like P．E．and music．But I don't like math at all．I think it's difficult and boring．Do you think so？
After school，I often play basketball with my classmates．It's my favorite outdoor activity．Sometimes I draw pictures with my good friends in the park．Every Tuesday and Thursday，I go to the school library．Do you think my school life is very interesting？
My teachers are very friendly to me．And I like my school life very much．What about you？
Can you tell me something about your school life？Sincerely，Li Tao．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容以My school life为题，给你在美国的网友Jack 写-封电子邮件，介绍你的学习生活，注意邮件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．课程安排，以及我喜欢的科目
2．课外活动

常用到的重点短语：
not…at all：一点也不
be friendly to sb：对某人友好
【高分句型】
1．①But I ②don't like math at all．
①but"但是"，表示转折，引出下文．
②not…at all：一点也不
2．I think it's difficult and boring
think后接上宾语从句．
3．Do you think my school life is very interesting？
think后接上宾语从句．一般疑问句询问好友的意见．

解答 One possible version
Dear Jack，
Hi，I'm Li Tao，a student of Class 6，Grade 9．My school life is very interesting．
Classes begin at 8：00 am．I have four classes in the morning．In the afternoon，I have two classes．I study Chinese，math，English and some other subjects．English is my favorite subject and I often speak English with my classmates．I also like P．E．and music．But I don't like math at all．【高分句型】I think it's difficult and boring．【高分句型】Do you think so？（课程安排，以及我喜欢的科目）
After school，I often play basketball with my classmates．It's my favorite outdoor activity．Sometimes I draw pictures with my good friends in the park．Every Tuesday and Thursday，I go to the school library．Do you think my school life is very interesting？【高分句型】（课外活动）
My teachers are very friendly to me．And I like my school life very much．What about you？
Can you tell me something about your school life？
Sincerely，Li Tao

点评 初中英语的作文，着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在对所出现的问题或是采取的措施描写中注意使用连词或是好的句式．对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文．