Question

【题目】书面表达

时间过得飞快，似乎几个月前才进入初三，现在中考却近在眼前。请以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”为题，用英语写一篇短文，内容要点如下：

1．你发现老师现在上课语速很快。由于有太多的作业和考试，学生没有足够的时间来进行课外活动；

2．有的同学以前学习不太努力，但现在他们已经意识到这次考试的重要性，并且全身心投入到学习中去；

3．你在这最后一个月里的打算和安排……

注意：

1．短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2．第3要点的内容须用2至3句话作适当发挥；

3．词数90左右，短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Are We Ready for the Challenge?

How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon!

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I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!

Answer 1

【答案】Are We Ready for the Challenge?

How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon! I find the teachers speak more quickly than usual in class now, and we have so much homework and so many exams that we do not have enough time for any after-school activities．Some students did not study hard enough before, but now they have realized the importance of the exam and are putting all their effort into study．During the last month, I am going to listen carefully in class and pay more attention to details, and it is also important for us to keep a balance between study and rest．

I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!

【解析】本文属于材料作文，要表达如今的学习和以前的区别以及你的计划和打算。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如usual，so much，after-school activities，the importance of，put ones effort into，pay attention to，it is adj for sb to do。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。