Question

5．请以MyDream为题写一篇80词左右的作文
内容包括：1．你的梦想是什么？2．为什么会有这样的梦想？（至少1个理由）
3．你有什么优点或爱好？（至少l点4．为了实现梦想，你觉得自己目前需要做什么？（至少l点）注意：短文应包括所有内容要点，要点表达不分先后，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
My dream
I think everyone should have a dream．A dream can push you ahead．
My dream is to become a tourist guide．Why do 1 want to be a guide？First，I like travelling．If l become a guide，I can travel all around the world．Second，I like making friends．If I work as a guide，I can make lots of friends．
I know it's not easy to be a good guide．So from now on I'll spend more time doing all kinds of reading．Besides，I'll learn how to think for others．
There is a saying"Where there is a will，there is a way，"I am sure my dream will come true one day if I work hard．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
If I become a guide，I can travel all around the world．如果我成为一名导游，我能环游世界．if引导的条件状语从句．
【高分句型二】
There is a saying"Where there is a will，there is a way"有句谚语：有志者事竟成．
Where there is a will，there is a way有志者事竟成．谚语的运用．

解答 My dream
I think everyone should have a dream．A dream can push you ahead．
My dream is to become a tourist guide（你的梦想是什么）．Why do I want to be a guide？First，I like travelling．If I become a guide，I can travel all around the world．【高分句型一】Second，I like making friends．If I work as a guide，I can make lots of friends．（为什么以及优点或爱好）
I know it's not easy to be a good guide．So from now on I'll spend more time doing all kinds of reading．Besides，I'll learn how to think for others．（目前需要做什么）
There is a saying"Where there is a will，there is a way，"【高分句型二】I am sure my dream will come true one day if I work hard．

点评 本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等．