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【题目】林娜和父母正在澳大利亚悉尼旅游。今天是他们到达悉尼的第二天．他们游览了悉尼著名的城市动物园——塔龙加动物园(Taronga Zoo)。假如你是林娜，请根据下面表格中给出的提示写一篇日记，简要介绍塔龙加动物园并描述自己在园中的活动。

塔龙加动物园
历史及规模
地理位置
活动

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1916年开放；拥有4000余只动物

位于悉尼市，临近悉尼歌剧院(Sydney Opera House)

参观了来自世界各地的动物，如大象、长颈鹿、老虎等

参观了澳大利亚本土动物卡拉(koala)、袋鼠及鸸鹋(emu)等

欣赏了动物园著名的鸟类及海狮(sea lion)表演　　要求：1.日记必须包含表格中所给出的全部内容；

2．词数：不少于80词(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。

August 20th，Thursday Sunny

Answer 1

【答案】August 20th，Thursday Sunny

Sydney is really a beautiful city.This is my second day here.I visited Taronga Zoo together with my parents today.Taronga Zoo, which is very close to the Sydney Opera House, is a city zoo.It opened in 1916 and is the home to over 4，000 animals.It is such a nice place to visit that we spent the whole day there.In the zoo we saw a lot of animals from all over the world such as elephants, giraffes and tigers.We also saw many local animals such as strong kangaroos, cute koalas and large emus.Besides, we watched the famous bird show and sea lion show in the zoo.

In a word, it was a nice day for me.I'm looking forward to tomorrow's trip to other places in Sydney.

【解析】短文是一篇日记的形式，介绍塔龙加动物园的情况，句子应该用一般现在时，叙述自己的在园中的活动情况，应该用一般过去时。不要遗漏要点，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，注意上下文的衔接。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：.It is such a nice place to visit that we spent the whole day there. In a word, it was a nice day for me.用了which引导的定语从句，用了连词such…that…增加了文章的亮点。