Question

【题目】书面表达

没有无私的、自我牺牲的母爱的帮助, 孩子的心灵将是一片荒漠。我们要学会感恩, 学会回报。某英语网站举办以“My mother”为题的英语征文活动, 请你根据下列思维导图提供的信息, 写一篇短文, 介绍自己的母亲和你的亲情故事。

要求：(l)语句通顺, 表达正确；

(2)短文须包括全部要点，可适当发挥；

(3)不得出现真实的校名和人名。

(4)字数不少于60词。

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

We need love. We also need to love others. The person I love most is my mohter. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long balck hair. She is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons on the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.

When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after graduating from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes for her to make her look still young. I’ll take her to travel all over the world.

Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文，主要介绍母亲的相关信息（年龄、工作、外貌、喜欢的东西和不喜欢的东西）、你的母亲为你做的事情以及你将为你的母亲做些什么事情。注意时态的准确使用，且灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型使文章更加生动形象。