Question

书面表达。（15分）

请以_________ changes my life为题写一篇不少于80个词的短文。

要求：1. 先把题目补充完整(空格处可以是单词、短语，也可以是从句)；

2．短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息；

3．词数80左右。

____________ changes my life

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Answer 1

The computer changes my life

I think the computer changes my life. Before computers were widely used, I had to go to the libraries to look up information that I wanted. It was very inconvenient.

But now, with the help of computers, my life has become more convenient and interesting. I can search for any information I want easily. I can communicate with my friends in many ways, such as e-mail, QQ... I can also play computer games in my spare time. Thanks to the computer, I feel happier than before.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以_________ changes my life为题写一篇作文。我们要根据要求填充题目，确定要写的主要内容。内容主要包括：没有电脑时候的情况；有电脑后电脑怎样改变了我的生活。主要内容虽然已经确定，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从有电脑前有电脑后两个方面，讲述了电脑改变了我的生活。层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如I think computers changes my life.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如But now, with the help of computers, my life has become more convenient and interesting.等。

考点：话题类作文。