题目内容
某中学毕业生论坛正在热议关于即将来临的暑假活动安排，下面截取了论坛的部分内容，请你根据论坛中的信息以及你自己的看法，写一篇英语短文。
Subject: How do you arrange your coming summer holiday? | |
Jack | get a part-time job practice myself… get more experiences…
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Sandy | travel around China open up my eyes… relax… |
Sophia | study get ready for high school… feed my mind… |
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温馨提示：
内容必须包括论坛中其中两个同学的观点及理由，并写出你的观点及理由；
开头和结尾已为你写好，你只需接着写；
词数：70个左右。开头和结尾不计入总词数。准备
Recently we had a discussion about how we arrange our coming summer holiday at www.luntan.com. _____________________________________________________________________________
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One possible version：
Recently we had a discussion about how we arrange our coming summer holiday at www.luntan.com. Here are some students’s plans about their summer holiday. Jack is planning to get a part-time job. One thing is that it can practice himself, another thing is that he can get more experiences to make preparations for the future. Sandy will travel around the world to open her eyes and relax herself. Sophia is going to study, because she wants to get ready for high school and feed her mind.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍大家的暑假计划和理由。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般将来时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Jack is planning to......，Sophia is going to ......，it would be......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了大家在论坛上讨论对即将到来的暑假的计划，接下来介绍Jack, Sandy和Sophia的计划和理由，最后指出自己的观点和理由。此处用了a part-time job，make preparations for， around the world，helping my parents with 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
考点：提纲作文。
