Question

【题目】书面表达

请以“My Favorite Sports Player”为题，用英语写一篇短文。要点应包括运动员出生的时间、地点、爱好及喜欢他(她)的理由等。词数不少于70。

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Answer 1

【答案】My Favorite Sports Player

Yao Ming is my favorite sports player.He was born on September 12th，1980 in Shanghai. He is over 2 metres tall, and he is very strong.

He plays basketball well.He has many hobbies.He likes playing computer games and surfing the Internet.He is not only a good basketball player but also a kind man.He cares about the poor children.He often helps them.So I think he is my hero.

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如my favorite sports player，be born，play basketball well，like doing sth.，play computer games，surfing the Internet not only…but also，care about等。而He is not only a good basketball player but also a kind man./ He likes playing computer games and surfing the Internet.等复杂句子的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。