Question

【题目】假如你是王宁，你的英国笔友Linda想了懈你的周末生活。请根据下面的内容提示，给Linda写一封电子邮件，告诉她你是如何度过上个周末的。内容提示：

1.上周六上午，你和父母一起骑自行车去了一家草莓采摘观光园；

2.听采摘观光园主人讲述自己的人生故事：16岁时一场车祸夺去了她的双腿，在

政府和家人的帮助下创建草莓采摘观光园，每年收入近百万元，吸引大量游客：

3.和采摘观光园主人合影，在采摘观光园餐馆就餐；

4.你的感受。

要求：

1．语言规范，语句通顺，内容充实；

2．字数：不少于100词；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

可能用到的词汇：Picking and Sightseeing Garden采摘观光园；strawberry草莓；

government地方政府；attract吸引；tourist游客

Dear Linda,

Thanks for your last email. ____________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Wang Ning

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Linda，

Thanks for your last email．

Last Saturday morning， I went to a strawberry Picking and Sightseeing Garden with my parents． We rode bikes there because it was not far from my home． We listened to the story of the owner of the Picking and Sightseeing Garden． At the age of 16， he lost both of his legs because of a car accident． With the help of the government and her family， she set up the Picking and Sightseeing Garden．The annual income is close to one million yuan and it attracts a large number of tourists．

We also took photos with the owner and had lunch at the Picking and Sightseeing Garden．

It was a great weekend and I had a wonderful time．

Yours

Wang Ning

【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank for，last Saturday morning，ride bikes，far from，listen to，at the age of 16，because of，with the help of，set up，be close to，a large number of，have a wonderful time等。而We rode bikes to there because it was not far from my home/ At the age of 16，he lost both of his legs because of a car accident.两种因果关系句式结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。