题目内容
13.最近,你们学校开展了以"中国梦,我的梦"为主题的活动,作为一名中学生应该有自己的梦想,你的梦想是什么呢?请你以"My Dream"为题写一篇英语短文.要求:
1.描述自己的梦想.
2.如何实现这个梦想.
3.80词左右,可适当发挥,短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数.
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、地名和校名等相关信息.
My Dream
Everyone has his dream.My dream is to be.
分析 【高分句型一】
Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice.也许成为导游是最好的选择.
本句是动名词短语being a tour guide 作为主语,谓语用is.还用最高级best来总结上文给出的原因说这是最好的选择
【高分句型二】
If I become a tour guide,I can travel all around China,and know more about our country.如果我成为一名导游,我能全中国旅游,更了解我们国家.
本句是运用了if引导的时间状语从句,主句含有情态动词,从句用一般现在时代替一般将来
解答 My Dream
Everyone has his dream.My dream is to be a tour guide.(梦想是什么.)
Why do I want to be a tour guide?First of all,I‘m an outgoing girl,and I like doing some exciting things.Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice【高分句型一】If I become a tour guide,I can travel all around China,and know more about our country【高分句型二】Then I will tell the foreign tourists about our colorful history.Second,I like making friends.If I work as a tour guide,I can make a lot of friends all over the world.This may be great.Perhaps someday my foreign friends will ask me to visit their countries.I really like to go to their countries to know something about their culture.What's more,I like singing.Singing English songs is my favorite.I believe I will be popular with foreign tourists.Their trip will be excellent.(理由)
Now,I am still a middle school student.My job now is to work hard in school.Then I'll go to university to learn something about being a tour guide.I'm sure I can be a qualified tour guide in the future.(怎样实现梦想)
There is an old saying:"No pain,no gain."I'll try my best to make my dream come true!
点评 写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用.写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达自己梦想会实现的愿望.
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