Question

【题目】以“The Hero in My Heart”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。

提示：可以谈论一下你心中的英雄是谁(比如亲人、朋友、老师或名人等)；他（她）有什么样的事迹或故事；你喜欢他（她）的原因及应该怎样向他（她）学习。

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Answer 1

【答案】Jackie Chan is one of the most famous film stars．And he is also a hero in my heart．He played a role in a film when he was a child．Through his hard work, he has made over 80 films．He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action perfect．As a Chinese, he promises to make every foreigner know Chinese kung fu culture well．From Jackie Chan, we can learn a lot, such as the resolution to succeed and the thoughts of helping others

【解析】本题要求以“The Hero in My Heart”为题，写一篇短文，谈谈心中的英雄。首先要说出自己的英雄是谁，再讲讲他的英雄事迹或故事，结合故事说说喜欢他的原因。最后要说明应该向心中的英雄学习。讲述英雄的事迹用一般过去时态，其它内容用一般现在时态，短文用第一、三人称进行表达。短文要中心明确，主旨鲜明，思想健康。要注意语言的选择及句型的运用，避免汉式英语及零时态现象。