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Wuxi is made up of the city centre,Jiangyin and Yixing. It is a good place to live. Wuxi has a long history. There are many famous places of interest. The Taihu Square is a good place for people to relax after a day's work. If you come to visit Wuxi,you can have different
kinds of local food at Nanchan Temple. The best time to visit Wuxi is spring and autumn£¬ because the weather is very pleasant. I think our hometown is a good place.