Question

【题目】假如你叫杨晨，你的美国笔友Tim目前正在学习中文。在学习中文的过程中，他遇到了下面一些困难，如下表所示，请你用英语给他写一封邮件，给Tim一些学习中文的建议。

困难	建议
上课听不懂老师讲的话	1. 可以让老师放慢语速
	2. 通过看中文电影和听中文歌曲来提高听力
不懂一些中文的特殊表达	通过大量阅读中文书来了解这些特殊表达

要求：1. 必须包括全部要点，可适当发挥；

2. 80词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tim，

I'm sorry to hear that you have some trouble in learning Chinese. But it doesn't matter. I believe I can help you.

First，it's difficult for you to understand what your Chinese teacher says in class. In my opinion，you should tell your teacher about it so that she can speak more slowly. On the other hand，you can try to improve your listening by watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs.

Second，you find there are some special expressions and you can't understand them. I think you can learn about them by reading lots of Chinese books. The more you read，the more you can understand.

I think the best way to learn a language is to use it. It's my secret when I learn English. So try to use Chinese as often as possible.

I hope my suggestions can help you.

Yours，

Yang Chen

【解析】本篇作文属于材料作文，主要向你的美国笔友Tim提一些学习中文的建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用了时态语态和主谓一致，特别是一些亮点词句，如I am sorry to hear that, have trouble in doing sth, in my opinion, on the other hand, the+比较级，as often as possible等，增加了逻辑关系，增强了上下文的意思连贯性，用词准确，句子通顺。