Question

书面表达（15%）

就你看过的一本书，一部电影或是一部戏剧写一篇70字左右的书评、影评或剧评。可参考以下框架:

 

Review of ______________

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Answer 1

Review of 2012

2012 is a famous movie made in the USA, which was showed in China last month. What I have to admit is that this movie is wonderful, such as its advanced digital video effect and the worry about the future of human beings.

In fact I do not agree with the result of this movie, in which only some scientists and political leaders can survive but not common people. All of us have the right to survive. The key reason of survival is not that this man can offer a larger contribution to our society, because for a future rebuilding, everyone is important.

Another thing I remember is the development of great China. In that movie, the work of manufacturing the surviving ship was completed by China. This suggests that China is admitted by the world more and more. It is a fact, and so we should love our country. A great and powerful motherland can allow us a happy, safe life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，句式，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。结合材料可知本文主要是第三人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时，注意情态动词后面动词用原形。为了使表达更有逻辑性，可以使用序数词，连接词等。此类作文首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。

【亮点说明】文中使用了一些主从复合句，为文章增色不少。如What I have to admit is that this movie is wonderful, such as its advanced digital video effect and the worry about the future of human beings. 我不得不承认的是，这部电影很不错，比如它先进的数字化特技效果和对于人类未来的担忧。In fact I do not agree with the result of this movie, in which only some scientists and political leaders can survive but not common people. 事实上，我不同意这部电影的结果，其中只有一些科学家和政治领导人们可以生存，但不是普通人。等等。

考点：话题作文。