Question

如今你已经是初三的学生了，但你发现同学之间的沟通少了。于是你在班里的板报上呼吁同学间应加强沟通，请以沟通的重要性为题写一篇约80字的文章，内容包括：

1. 沟通是必要的，也是重要的；

2. 沟通有很多种方式，如：语言，眼神交流，肢体语言，手势等；

3. 沟通带来的多种好处：可以帮助同学增进友谊，可以共同解决学习上的难题，可以减少大家的误解(misunderstanding)……

Communication is Important

We are the students in Grade Three now. but I find we are lack of communication these days.I think it is not good for our studies. Because ……

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Communication is Important

We are the students in Grade Three now. but I find we are lack of communication these days. I think it is not good for our studies. Because communication is very necessary as well as important/ Communication is very necessary, and it is very important, too. And there are many ways of communication, such as words, making eye contact, body language, hand gestures, and so on.. Also, communication is very useful among us. It can make our friendships stronger and stronger. We can do with our difficulties with communication. Communication can be reduced our misunderstanding each other.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求以沟通的重要性为题写一篇80字的短文。题目中给出的材料较为详细，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要是一般现在时态，人称较为复杂，注意主谓语之间数的问题。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来。

【亮点说明】文章多处使用具有连接意义的词如because、as well as、and、also等等，使文章语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。

考点：提纲作文。