题目内容
为实现我们的梦想而行动起来吧 | |
要点提示 | 素材串联(参考词汇、句型) |
引出主题 | 我们每个人都有梦想，但是我们如何实现自己的梦想呢(realize our dreams)? |
Frank为自己的梦想所做的努力 | 1. 弗兰克十五岁时梦想当一名医生，但现在他六十岁了，他整天躺在床上，还想成为一名医生(dream to be a doctor)。 2. 弗兰克只是生活在梦想中，而没有为之做出任何努力，这就是他没有实现梦想的原因(live in，without any actions)。 |
自己会为梦想做些什么 | 1. 希望长大以后，成为一名工程师(grow up)。 2. 我每天会努力学习，并且提高应对以后工作的能力(study hard，improve abilities to)。 |
中国梦 | 民族团结，国家富强，人民幸福。 |
词数80～100。
We all have our dreams, but how to realize our dreams.
We all have our dreams, but how to realize our dreams. Frank wanted to become a doctor when he was 15 years old. Now he is sixty, and still lies in bed, dreaming to be a doctor. Frank is only living in the dream, but he doesn’t do anything to realize his dream. This is the reason why his dream doesn’t come true.
I have a dream, too. I want to be an engineer when I grow up. I will study hard every day and try to improve abilities to deal with future work. That way my dream can come true.
Our country has a dream. That is national unity, strong country and people live a happy life. We must try our best to realize our Chinese Dream.
【解析】
试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以如何实现梦想为话题写一篇作文。作文应主要包括三个方面。首先是一个反例，说的是Frank，他虽然有梦想，但是他从来没有为梦想努力过，我们不能这样；第二方面是说一说自己的梦想，以及自己想要如何实现梦想；最后说一说我们的中国梦。我们需要按照题目的要求，用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。梦想这一话题是学生们比较熟悉的，平时的学习中所涉及的这方面的词汇和短语，积累得也比较多，因此学生在写作时不会感到没有话说。但是要想把这些内容表达得准确，并且还能使意思连贯、流畅，这就需要多下功夫了。我们需要注意长短句的结合，把握文章的节奏，另外，通过多使用好的句型，来使文章流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。作者按照题目的要求，将表格中所列举的内容用正确的英语表达了出来。没有语言错误，意思表达得也很清楚。首先作者把Frank 的例子告诉了我们，Frank is only living in the dream, but he doesn’t do anything to realize his dream.接下来作者讲述了自己的梦想，I have a dream, too. I want to be an engineer when I grow up.以及作者如何实现梦想，I will study hard every day and try to improve abilities to deal with future work. That way my dream can come true；最后作者提到了我们的中国梦。中国梦的实现也需要我们每个人真正的付诸行动的。整篇短文意思连贯，语音准确，使用好的句型和短语较多。
考点：提纲类作文。
Nice house with a garden. There are five rooms ready for using, quiet and convenient, fully furnished(家具齐全). You can surf the Internet. $ 85 per week including bills of phone and power. Female(女性), non-smoker. No pet. Helen, 25790438 or 22700457 |
Sale Chairs, a set of 4 red/brown, $180; A coffee table, black, fine wood, $ 30; An oil painting, by a modern artist, sailing boat in the rain, $170; A fridge, big, double doors, $ 450; Old books, $10, each. Tel: weekday: 578220115; Weekend: 592235187 |
Part-time Assistant Wanted Needed by busy electronics(电子的) company to help with the development of a computer. Should have practical experience. Time: 2:30 pm ~6:00 pm Mon. ~Thur. Pay depend on education and experience. Letters of application(申请信) to Bob White. Telephone: 14790327643 E-mail: assistant @ 126.com |
1. If Mary wants to share the house with Helen, she mustn’t ___________.
A. call her at 592235187 B. feed pets
C. send an e-mail D. have practical experience
2.If you would like to buy an oil painting, you can ___________.
A. make a telephone B. go to the bookstore
C. write an application D. surf the Internet
3. If you call Helen at 2570438, you can ___________.
A. buy a set of chairs B. buy old books
C. share a house D. find a job
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Once a man had a hen and the hen laid two golden eggs every day . The man was very happy . Every day he took two gold eggs to the market and 1. them there . With the money , he and his family lived 2. .
One day , one of his friends said to him , “My friend , you take two eggs to the market every day and sell 3. there . There is too much trouble . Why not take out all the eggs once from her 4. ?”
The man liked the idea , but he wouldn’t make a 5.to kill the hen . A few days 6. he decided to kill the hen because he thought his friend’s 7. was very good , and it was really tiring to take the eggs to the market 8. .
The next day he killed the hen and the opened the hen’s stomach . But he couldn’t find 9. in the stomach . He looked for the eggs here and there , left and 10. , up and down , but there was nothing inside .
