题目内容
书面表达(10分)
美国女孩Amy是你班上新来的同学,她想了解学校的课外活动。请你根据以下表格中的信息,写一篇短文告诉她有关情况。
课外活动时间 | 每天下午3:30至4:50 |
户外活动 | 可以在操场上打球(足球、篮球、排球、乒乓球) |
室内活动 | 绘画、象棋、唱歌、舞蹈、中国功夫(Chinese Kungfu) |
最受欢迎的活动 | 中国功夫,因为它可以强身健体。老师是一位年轻的男老师,长得很酷。 |
现在大多数同学还希望 | 加入DIY俱乐部,因为……(至少写两点) |
要求:1.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,但不要使用真实姓名和班名等:
2.词数:60~80。开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Welcome to my class, Amy.1 am very glad to tell you about the after-class activities in our school.
I hope you will enjoy as much as you can during your stay in our school.
Welcome to my class, Amy. I am very glad to tell you about the after-class activities in our school. Our after-class activities are from 3:00 p.m. to 4:50 p.m. every day. You may play different ball games such as football, basketball, volleyball and table tennis in the school field. Besides that, there are some indoor activities like drawing, playing chess, singing, dancing, Chinese Kunfu and so on. Of all the activities, Chinese Kunfu is the most popular one. Because it helps us to become strong and keep fit. The teacher is a young man. He looks very cool. Now most students in our school hope to join the DIY Club, because they can learn more about DIY and have fun making repairing and decorating things themselves.
I hope you will enjoy as much as you can during your stay in our school.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇短文要求我们介绍学校的课外活动。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲,主要包括以下内容:课外活动时间;户外、室内活动种类;最受欢迎的活动;以及现在大多数同学的希望等。主要要点虽然已经列出,但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据表格内容,介绍了学校的课外活动,层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如The teacher is a young man. He looks very cool. Now most students in our school hope to join the DIY Club, because they can learn more about DIY and have fun making repairing and decorating things themselves.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要,意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型,如You may play different ball games such as football, basketball, volleyball and table tennis in the school field.等。
考点:表格类作文。