Question

【题目】短文写作(14分)

学会分享很重要。你有哪些东西要分享?可采取哪些方式分享?请根据图示内容，结合自身的一次经历，写一篇短文，并阐述分享的意义。

要求：

1．要点齐全，并适当发挥；

2．词数：80词左右(开头已给出、不|卜人总词数)；

3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学佼名称。

Sharing

It’s very important to learn to share with each other．

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Answer 1

【答案】

Sharing

It’s very important to learn to share with each other have many things to share in different ways．For example，I can share some beautiful pictures，favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by QQ．e-mail which are widely used. Now I’d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you．

Emily was lonely and unhappy．I hoped to cheer her up．So I shared my favorite books and chatted with her after class．As time went by，she became used to sharing her feelings with me．Now we’re good friends．

In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up．We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more．

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇图画作文。图画内容要点突出，条理清楚，我们要做的就是用英语把这些要点内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘图画内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了图画包含的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语如share …with、face to face、cheer sb up、go by、be used to、not only… but also…、grow up、learn … from…等，这为文章增色不少。