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11．青少年杂志社邀请你参加每年度的中学生写作竞赛，请以"My American friend"为题，根据所给信息完成下面的小短文． 要求：要点齐全，书写工整．

Looks	明亮大眼睛，长长的头发
Personality	幽默，讲滑稽笑话使人发笑，乐于助人，在公交车上让座
School life	所有科目中最喜欢法语，觉得学外语其乐无穷，有大量的时间进行课外活动
A travel experience	上周，乘飞机12个小时抵达北京 参观一些名胜古迹，了解许多中国文化
A DIY job	昨天，她和我一起装饰我的卧室，把墙涂成蓝色，张贴一些美丽的图画，安装明亮的灯．我们合作得很愉快．

My American friend
Suzy is my American friend．      ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．本文作者主要介绍自己的一个美国朋友的外表、个性、旅行经历等．全文主要用一般现在时态和一般过去时态．
高分句型：
①She often tells funny jokes and always makes people laugh．她经常讲有趣的笑话，总是使人发笑．句子中make sb do sth表示让某人做某事，后面跟动词原形．
②Last week，it took her twelve hours to get to Beijing by plane．上周，她花了十二个小时乘飞机到达北京．句子考查it took/takes sb some time to do sth表示花费某人多长时间做某事，it作形式主语，真正的主语是to引导的不定式短语．

解答 My American friend
Suzy is my American friend．（引出话题）She has big bright eyes and long straight hair．She has a good sense of humour．（长相）She often tells funny jokes and always makes people laugh（高分句型）．（个人品质）
Among all the subjects，she likes French best，she thinks learning foreign languages is fun．In the school，she has lots of time for after-school activities．（学校生活）
Last week，it took her twelve hours to get to Beijing by plane．（高分句型）She visited some places of interest and learn a lot about the culture of China/Chinese culture．（旅游经历）
She also likes doing DIY．Yesterday，she decorated my bedroom with me．We painted the walls blue，put up some beautiful pictures and put in a bright light in my bedroom．We had fun working together．（介绍一次DIY工作）

点评 文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如sense of humour，tells jokes，lots of after-school activities．，lplaces of interestast week，learn about，a lot，likes doing，put up had fun working等短语，文中还用到了宾语从句 she thinks learning foreign languages is fun．；固定句型it took her twelve hours to get to Beijing by plane．文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅．