Question

7．假设图片是你的房间，请根据图片描述一下你房间里物品位置．要求40字左右，字迹工整，语句通顺．



My room

I have a nice room．There is a bed，a desk，a table and a chair in it．The clock is on the table，there are some books and a plant on the desk．On the wall there is a kite and some pictures．The football is under the chair，I love my room．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 There is a bed，a desk，a table and a chair in it．里面有一张床，一张课桌，一张桌子和一把椅子．这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
The clock is on the table．闹钟在桌子上． on the table，在桌子上，是介词词组．

解答 My room
I have a nice  room【开头点明主题】．There is a bed，a desk，a table and a chair in it．【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】The clock is on the table【高分句型二，注意介词词组的使用】，there are some books and a plant on the desk．On the wall there is a kite and some pictures．The football is under the chair，【正文部分详细介绍房间】I love my room．【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．