题目内容
为了迎接世界杯的到来,我们学校今天(周四)举行了一场足球赛,4班获胜。请你根据表格所提供的信息,写一篇日记,并表达自己作为14班一名球员获胜后的感受。
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June 12th, 2014. _________ Sunny
To welcome the arrival of the World Cup,
June 12th, 2014. _________ Sunny
To welcome the arrival of the World Cup, There was a soccer game between Class 3 and Class 4 on the school field from 3:00p.m to 4:30p.m.. But when the two teams were palying hard , it began to rain . We had to move to the school gym. Both the two teams tried their best to win. All the students cheered for us..In the end our class team won. As a player, I felt very happy though I was very tired. I knew it was very important to do teamwork.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇应用文作文。要求写一篇日记描述学校举行的足球比赛。日记是记述的过去的事情,所以在写作中要注意应用过去时态。在描述中要注意场地的变化,抒发自己队获胜后的感受。
【亮点说明】这篇短文注意到了日记的格式。能正确的应用过去时态。内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整。
考点:应用文作文。