Question

【题目】在英语论坛上，大家都在讨论电脑对我们生活的影响，请根据以下的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，表达一下你的想法。
提示：1）电脑是最重要的发明之一，其应用也越来越广泛。
2）电脑有利也有弊。express your feelings.
3）人们应该正确使用电脑。

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

The computer is one of the most important inventions. It has greatly changed people's lives. We use the computer in schools, families, shops, and offices. With the help of the computer, our lives become more easily. But the computer also has disadvantages and it has caused some social problems. Many children like playing computer games so much that they can't get away from them. Thieves can steal money on the Web easily. I think we should use the computer wisely and make it serve us better.

【解析】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。