Question

健康一直是人们关注的问题。请根据下表信息提示，写一篇短文。

健康的重要性	保持健康的方法
健康比金钱重要……	健康饮食：多吃水果蔬菜；少吃快餐。	摒弃（get rid of）不良习惯：要吃早饭；饭前洗手； 早睡早起，不熬夜。	多锻炼，强身健体。
你的观点

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥，但不得使用真实人名和校名等；

3）词数：100词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）；

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Answer 1

Health is the most important thing to people. Some people may think money is very important. But without health, we can’t have a good life. How can we keep healthy? There are many ways can help us. Firstly, we should eat healthy food, such as fruits and vegetables. Fast food is bad for our health, so we can’t eat much of them. Secondly, we need to get rid of some bad habits. Some people don’t have breakfast or don’t wash hands before meal. We must get rid of them. Besides, our bodies need enough sleep, so we can’t stay up late. Thirdly, doing exercises is also good for our health. We can do many sports we like, such as running, climbing, playing basketball and so on. It can make us healthier and stronger. In my opinion, people should also have a positive attitude to life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，题中给出了写作的要点和要求。写作时，要注意要点的齐全，并将其组织好。句子要完整，表达要准确，尤其注意主谓的一致性。可适当使用学习过的一些复合句来表达，以及一些连词的使用。

【亮点分析】此文结构完整，要点齐全，表达准确流利。文章使用了Firstly首先, Secondly第二, Thirdly第三,使结构更清晰明了。文中也有很多常用的表达形式，例如：But without health, we can’t have a good life.但是没有健康，我们不能很好的生活；Besides, our bodies need enough sleep, so we can’t stay up late.另外，我们的身体也需要足够的睡眠，所以我们不能熬夜；In my opinion, people should also have a positive attitude to life.在我看来，人们对生活也应该有个积极的态度。

考点：提纲作文。