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4．2014年春节联欢晚会上，王铮亮的一曲《时间都去哪儿了？》，让很多人怅然于时光的流逝．请根据以下提示，以How do we make good use of our time？为题，谈谈你如何安排自己的时间．词数：80词左右．
Things you should spend more time on：
1．Exercising every day to keep healthy；
2．Spending time with your family；
3．Making plans for your future；
4．Giving help to others；
5．Playing for fun and enjoyinfg life；
6．Reading good books．
How do we make good use of our time？
（时间的重要性）Time is important to everyone．We need to make good use of it．Here are some things we should spend more time on．
（陪伴家人）First of all，we should spend more time with our family．It's our family who will support us whenever we are in difficulty．（阅读）Reading good books is also an important thing．（锻炼保持健康）Besides，we should exercise every day to keep healthy．Only when we are in good health will we be able to achieve our dreams．（计划将来）Of course，to make our dreams come true，more time needs to be spent in planning for our future．（开心生活）In addition，never forget to spend some time playing for fun，life should be full of happiness．（帮助他人）Helping others can bring you happiness as well．
If we can make good use of our time，life will be more colorful and meaningful．．

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分析 本文是一篇提纲作文，要求是根据以下提示，以How do we make good use of our time？为题，谈谈如何安排自己的时间，根据提示，可知道一些如何花费时间的方式与做法，人称应该是第一人称，时态用一般现在时和一般将来时，要尽可能地使用can，could，should等情态动词来表达建议．重点短语及句型make good use of，spend more time on，Besides，In addition，be full of等等

解答 How do we make good use of our time？
（时间的重要性）Time is important to everyone．We need to make good use of it．Here are some things we should spend more time on．
（陪伴家人）First of all，we should spend more time with our family．It's our family who will support us whenever we are in difficulty．（阅读）Reading good books is also an important thing．（锻炼保持健康）Besides，we should exercise every day to keep healthy．Only when we are in good health will we be able to achieve our dreams．（计划将来）Of course，to make our dreams come true，more time needs to be spent in planning for our future．（开心生活）In addition，never forget to spend some time playing for fun，life should be full of happiness．（帮助他人）Helping others can bring you happiness as well．
If we can make good use of our time，life will be more colorful and meaningful．

点评 本题是提纲作文，给出的提示较为详细，要求考生按照所给材料，通过合理的联想将正确内容正确地表达出来．同时还要结合自己的做法把文章内容加以想象、扩充或补充．