Question

【题目】书面表达(满分10分)

下表是有关Tom Miller的情况介绍, 请先根据表格中的提示信息, 写一篇介绍Tom Miller的短文, 然后再说说自己。

注意: 1. 文中应包括表格中的所有信息;

2. 词数60个左右。开头已经写好, 不计入总词数;

3. 文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名。

Name		Tom Miller	I
Age/Birthday		13/December 2nd
Favorite subject		music
Favorite sport		basketball
Lunch		noodles, fish
		tomatoes
. . .		. . .

I have a good friend. His name is Tom Miller.

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have a good friend. His name is Tom Miller. He is 13 years old. His birthday is on December 2nd. He likes singing and his favorite subject is music. But I like math, it’s difficult but interesting. At school, we have lunch together. I like chicken best. He likes noodles and fish, but he doesn’t like tomatoes. After school, we usually play basketball. It’s our favorite sport. We think it’s really relaxing.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是介绍自己的朋友的情况，所以句子用一般现在时，要注意上下文句子的衔接，不要出现语法错误。因为句子用的是一般现在时要注意主谓一致的问题。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语几句式，如：He likes singing and his favorite subject is music. But I like math, it’s difficult but interesting. At school, we have lunch together. I like chicken best. He likes noodles and fish, but he doesn’t like tomatoes. After school, we usually play basketball. 用了一些连词，如and，but等，增加了文章的色彩。