Question

【题目】 你是李华，你的朋友Peter写信给你说他在这个漫长又特别的寒假里的一些烦恼。在学习方面：学习上遇到困难，网络学习效率不佳，有时家庭作业不会做；在生活方面：和父母关系不好，自己有些伤心，父母在学业方面给了他很大的压力，父母不太理解他，甚至有时总是和他发生争吵。

Peter 希望你（李华）能给些合理的建议或提供帮助，以下是你的回信。（字数要求80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总字数）

Dear Peter,

I know that your troubles were coming out one after another during such a long special winter vacation. A a teenager at the same age as you, I truly understand your feelings, so I’d like to give you some advice.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】例文：

Dear Peter,

I know that your troubles were coming out one after another during such a long special winter vacation. As a teenager at the same age as you, I truly understand your feelings, so I’d like to give you some advice．

In study, you should talk about the situation with your teacher first. Maybe they will leave less homework and help you improve learning efficiency. In addition, you can ask your classmates about their ways to learn and change you own way if necessary. And more importantly, I think you should go and apologize to your parents. Tell them your feelings and pressure. They must will forgive you and help you find the solutions. Listening to soft music and doing exercise are also good ways to make you relax.

I hope these suggestions can be of some help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：此为书信作文；要求有两方面，分别是从学习和生活上给出建议；开头已给出，注意上下文的连贯；一般用含有情态动词句型，时态用一般将来时和一般现在时；在提建议的过程中注意连接词的使用，合理安排行文。