Question

【题目】书面表达

请根据下表中的信息用英文介绍你的好友Lily。要求条理清楚，语句通顺，可做适当发挥。词数90字左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.

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Answer 1

【答案】

I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.

She has a round face and big smiling eyes. She is a little shorter than I. She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart. She is a polite and honest girl, she is my real friend.I trust her, because she never lies and always keeps the secret for me. When I am sad, she always cares about me, and listens to my questions carefully. She has a sense of humor, she is also good at telling funny jokes. I seldom feel unhappy when I stay with her. She is willing to share things with others. When she helps others, she is always patient .She wants to be a social worker when she grows up.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照作文要求结合表格中的内容完成这篇介绍好友的文章，我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含好友外貌，特征进行陈述。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文简明、扼要地阐明了好友莉莉的基本信息，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。