Question

【题目】书面表达（15分）

目前，外出旅游已成为我们生活中的重要部分，但是在旅游过程中一些游客会有不文明的行为，包括某些随父母旅游的中学生，作为一名中学生请根据表格和英语提示，就如何做一个文明的游客，谈谈你的看法。

要求：1.字数不少于90词；

2.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名。

不文明行为	文明行为
乱扔垃圾、大声喧哗、乱写乱画……	排队上车、买票等、尊重当地风俗、听从导游.….

提示词：politely, respect, local customs, in line, relics(古迹）

Nowadays, travelling is becoming an important part of our life. But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest, including our middle school students.

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays travelling is becoming an important part of our life. But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest, including our middle school students. Some make loud noise in public places. Others throw rubbish everywhere, and some write or draw somewhere and so on. As a middle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors. Here is some advice. First, throw rubbish into dustbins and don’t write or draw on the relics. Second, Talk to others politely and don’t make noise in public places. Besides, we should wait in line when buying tickets or getting on the bus. We’d better follow guides and obey orders. At the same time, we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为提纲类作文，要求根据表格和英语提示，就如何做一个文明的游客，谈谈你的看法。写作提纲已经点明，故要完成写作任务，务必根据提纲把各要点表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如Some make loud noise in public places. Others throw rubbish everywhere, and some write or draw somewhere and so on.表示顺序的副词First, Second,的应用更使得短文表述层次更清晰。总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。