Question

【题目】书面表达

66. Peter是Xishan Middle School一位来自美国的交换生。假设你是Peter，请根据下面的表格信息给美国的同学Andy写一封信，向他简要介绍一下Xishan Middle School的情况，并对其中的校规谈谈你的感受或看法(至少一点)。

School	big, new...
Teachers	strict, kind...
Rules	Same as our school’s: ①wear school uniforms ②no food in class ③arrive at school on time ...	Different from our school’s: ①class starts early at 7:00 ②have lunch at home ...

注意：(1)内容必须包含表格要点，可适当发挥；(2)词数：80—100，信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Andy,

How’s it going? Now I’m an exchange student of Xishan Middle School in China.

I enjoy the life here. Can you write to me soon?

Yours,

Peter

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Andy,

How’s it going? Now I’m an exchange student of Xishan Middle School in China. The school is big and new. And the teachers here are strict but kind.

There are many rules which are the same as our school’s. For example, the students here have to arrive at school on time. They can’t eat food in class. And they have to wear school uniforms every day. Though some students don’t like to wear school uniforms, I think it’s good because uniforms are symbols of schools. But some rules are different. To my surprise, they usually have lunch at home. It’s quite different from us. Besides, class starts at 7:00. It’s a little early.

I enjoy the life here. Can you write to me soon?

Yours,

Peter

【解析】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如how’s it going?，be strict but kind，the same as，for example，have to do，on time，to my surprise，be different from，symbols of schools等。而There are many rules which are the same as our school’s./ Though some students don’t like to wear school uniforms, I think it’s good because uniforms are symbols of schools. / I think it’s good because uniforms are symbols of schools.等多种复杂从句结构的运用更是为文章增色不少。