Question

3．假如你是大明，作为一名《爸爸去哪儿》的粉丝，你在班级做了一个调查，以了解你们班同学与父母相处的情况，请你写一篇文章谈论你的调查结果．
[写作要点]
①少数学生和父母相处融洽；
②多数和父母有代沟（generation gap），没有共同话题（the same topics），相互不理解；
③一些认为父母过于关心他们，没有自由；
④改善与父母关系的建议：常和父母交谈；理解并尊重他们；还有…（至少一点你的建议）
[写作要求]
①词数90左右；
②文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
③文中需包括所有写作要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当加入过渡语句，使短文通顺，连贯；
④不得照抄原文，文中不得出现考生真实姓名和学校名称．
[评分标准]
语言规范，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯．
I have done a survey about how my classmates get on with their parents．Here are the results．Ihavedoneasurveyabouthowmyclassmatesgetonwiththeirparents．Herearetheresults．Only a few students can get along well with their parents．Most students have a generation gap with their parents，there is no common topic between them，they think their parents do not understand them．Some students think that parents care too much about them and they don't have any freedom，If they are in trouble，they will go to their friends instead of their parents．I think if your opinions are different from your parents'，you can communicate with them，and tellthem what you are thinking about．Ihopeallofuscangetalonghappilywithourparentsandhaveahappyfamily
I hope all of us can get along happily with our parents and have a happy family．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
If they are in trouble，they will go to their friends instead of their parents如果他们遇到麻烦，他们会去他们的朋友，而不是他们的父母．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．
高分句型二
I hope all of us can get along happily with our parents and have a happy family．我希望我们所有的人都能和父母幸福相处，有一个幸福的家庭．I hope 后面是宾语从句，I hope 是主句．

解答 I have done a survey about how my classmates get on with their parents．Here are the results．Only a  few students can get along well with their parents【要点一，少数学生和父母相处融洽】．Most students have a generation gap with their parents，there is no common topic between them，they think their parents do not understand them【要点二，多数和父母有代沟，没有共同话题，相互不理解】．Some students think that parents care too much about them and they don't have any freedom【要点三，一些认为父母过于关心他们，没有自由；
】，If they are in trouble，they will go to their friends instead of their parents【高分句型一，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】．I think if your opinions are different from your parents'，you can communicate with them，and tell them what you are thinking about．【要点四，改善与父母关系的建议】I hope all of us can get along happily with our parents and have a happy family．【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．