Question

15．假如你是宝宝，请根据所提供的信息给Linda写一封信，邀请她来哈尔滨度假，并希望她回信，要求包含所有信息，至少写出五句话．
Dear Linda，December 25th（ChristmasDay ）
      I'd like to invite you to spend your holiday in Harbin．There are many places of interest in Harbin，We can go to see the ice lantern，they are very beautiful，we can play with snow，it is very cold here and you should wear your warm clothes，I am looking forward to seeing you，write to me soon． 
                                                                           Yours，
                                                                           Baobao．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There are many places of interest in  Harbin．哈尔滨有许多名胜古迹．这是一个there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
I am looking forward to seeing you我期待着见到你． look forward to doing sth．期待做某事，是固定词组，注意动词形式．

解答 Dear Linda，December 25th（ Christmas Day ）
      I'd like to invite you to spend your holiday in Harbin【点明主题】． There are many places of interest in  Harbin【高分句型一，注意there be句型的使用】，we can go to see the ice lantern，they are very beautiful，we can play with snow，it is very cold here and you should wear your warm clothes，I am looking forward to seeing you【高分句型二，注意固定词组的使用】，write to me soon．【正文部分介绍哈尔滨和需要注意的事项】Yours，
                                                                                                                          Baobao．

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．