Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你叫李华，你的英国笔友Jim得知你最近正在使用一款运动健身的手机app, 想了解它的功能。请根据以下要点给他写一封邮件，对这款app的功能做简单介绍。

● 记录运动时间；

● 讲解运动方法；

● 提出运动建议；

● ……

注意: (1) 词数80100；

(2) 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；

(3) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；

(4) 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

I'd like to share this app with you for it will surely do you good.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I'd like to share this app with you for it will surely do you good. In the first place, your time of exercise will be recorded every day. And then you will know whether you get enough exercise. It's especially helpful to those who want to learn some new sports because you can find many teaching videos of playing sports in it. What's more, you may get more suggestions on how to exercise properly from it. All of them come from teachers, doctors, or coaches. Lastly, it's easy for you to know more people with the same exercise hobby as you. In that way, you will always find someone who can exercise together with you.You may try it out yourself, and I hope it helps.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1、题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求向笔友介绍一款运动健身的手机app，根据所给要点对app作简单的介绍。

2、例文采用一段式；时态主要是一般现在时；详细的介绍了这款运动健身的手机app的各种功能；意思连贯；结构清晰；逻辑性强。

3、高分亮点：

短语：share……with……；be helpful to；What's more；try out；the same……as。

句型：And then you will know whether you get enough exercise；.It's especially helpful to those who want to learn some new sports because you can find many teaching videos of playing sports in it。