题目内容
【题目】 请谈论你最喜欢的一次假期旅行经历, 请你根据以下提示完成作文。
1. 描述你最喜欢的一次假期旅行经历, 包括时间、地点、人物、活动。
2. 谈论你对这次旅行经历的感受。
3. 下次旅行你想去的地方是哪里?简要说明原因。
要求:文章内不得出现真实姓名, . 学校名等;作文长度不少于70词
I'd like to share one of my traveling experiences with you ____________________________
【答案】例文
I'd like to share one of my traveling experiences with you. I went to Wonderful Beach for a trip with my classmates. There were many people on vacation. They were friendly to each other.
At first, we swam happily in the sea. Then we tried paragliding. We played beach volleyball. When we were tired,we lay on the beach and relaxed. At noon, we went to have some seafood. It was very delicious! All of us had a great time. We felt very great. We still wanted to come here on our next trip.
Next time,I want to travel to Beijing, because there are many places of interest. The Great Wall is so wonderful that I want to climb it again. And I'd also like to eat Beijing roast duck.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文要求描述你最喜欢的一次假期旅行经历, 包括时间、地点、人物、活动。首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;再根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡平稳、自然流畅。
【题目】If you think you're too shy and want to be a little bit braver, try the following. You can make it.
There's no need to hide it. When they get to know you are a shy kid, they'll understand you better. This also helps you feel freer in talks.
When you smile, people think you are friendly and easy to talk to. Remember that other people have feelings too and most people will stay away from an angry-looking face.
If you find it hard to start talks, say something nice about people around you. Think about how great you feel when someone says something good to you. Doesn't it make you want to keep talking to that person?
Get your attention(注意) elsewhere. Think more about ways to enjoy the party or the game. Don't waste(浪费) time worrying about your looks or whether (是否)people like you or not.
Each time after you say "hi" or smile at someone for the first time, say to yourself "I did it"! Or it could be something bigger, like buying yourself an ice cream.
Keep trying and one day you'll never be "shy" when you talk to others.
How to be a little braver | |
Advice | Reasons |
Never 【1】the fact. | If you tell people you are shy, they will understand you better. |
Smile more. | People don’t 【2】the one with an angry-looking face. |
Start a talk with good words. | People will feel 【3】 and want to talk to you |
Pay more attention elsewhere. | It is a waste of time to 【4】 about others' opinions. |
Encourage(鼓励)【5】to say hi or smile at someone. | Keeping doing this and you will be much braver to talk to others in the future. |