Question

4．当今社会，无论在大街小巷、餐馆，还是聚会场所，你都能看见一些人正低着头玩手机．网络上给他们取了一个有趣的名字叫"低头族"．作为中学生，对此现象，你有什么看法？请写一篇80--100词的文章．
写作要求：1．书写工整，语句通顺；
2．文章中请勿使用真实姓名或地名；
3．自拟作文标题．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：With the development of society and science，mobile phones are widely used in our daily life．随着社会和科学的进步，手机在我们的日常生活中广泛应用．
With the development of society and science是with的复合结构，在句中说明背景情况．
句型二：①In a word，the mobile phone ②plays an important part in our life，but we ought to use it correctly．总之，手机在我们的生活中起着重要的作用，但是我们应该正确使用它．
In a word是介词短语，意思是"总而言之，总之"； play an important part in是一个常见的短语，意思是"在…中起着重要的作用"

解答 With the development of society and science，mobile phones are widely used in our daily life．【高分句型一】
We can see a number of mobile phone fans almost everywhere．As a middle school student，how should we use mobile phones properly？
We shouldn't spend too much time playing with our dear mobile phones．First，playing with phones is harmful to our eyes．Second，we have so much school-work to do．Third，we'd better talk to each other face to face instead of chatting on the phone．What's worse，if we pay much more attention to our phones，dangerous things may happen to us．【怎样正确使用手机】
In a word，the mobile phone plays an important part in our life，but we ought to use it correctly．【高分句型二】Then we can have a better life．（总结全文）

点评 考生在写作时，首先要仔细审题，要注意使用第一人称，时态主要使用现在的时态，在表述的时候要选用合适地道的语言，为使行文连贯流畅，可以使用first，second，third．可以使用with的复合结构，动名词短语等提高得分点的结构．