Question

14．（A）话题作文：
2016年8月20日，在里约奥运会上，中国女排顽强拼搏，奋勇争先，以3：1战胜塞尔维亚队摘得金牌，时隔十二年，再次实现了他们的冠军梦．亲爱的同学们，你们的梦想是什么？请以 My Dream 为题，谈谈你的梦想．
（B）图示作文：假设你是图中的小女孩，请仔细观察下列图片，展开合理想象，写一篇日记．

要求：话题作文或图示作文任选其一．
词数在80～100词之间．
字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥．
Saturday，June 3rd．
                                      

Answer 1

分析 （A）
高分句型：
句型一：
My dream is to be a writer when I grow up．我的梦想是长大后当一名作家．
不定式做表语；when引导时间状语从句；grow up长大．
句型二：
It's also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them．找到成功人士如何做的，以便于我向他们学习，这也是很重要的．
这是一个复合句，It is+形容词 to do sth做某事是…的；how引导宾语从句；so that引导结果状语从句．
（B）  
高分句型：
句型一：
They were so colorful that I couldn't help taking photos of them．它们如此五彩缤纷以至于我忍不住给它们拍照．
so…that…如此…以至于…；couldn't help doing忍不住做某事．
句型二：
I'm looking forward to going there again．我期待再次去那儿．
look forwad to doing sth期待做某事．

解答 （A）
My Dream
 I'm happy to hear that our Chinese Women's Volleyball Team won in the 2016 Olympics．They have realized their dream．（引出下文）Everyone has his or her own dream．（引出下文）My dream is to be a writer when I grow up．（高分句型一）Writing has been （a） part of my life．Through writing，I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others．．（提出自己的梦想）I can achieve my dream by reading widely and working hard at school to learn as much as possible．It's also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them．（实现梦想的方式）（高分句型二）
Where there is a will，there is a way．I will hold on to/stick to my dream till it comes true one day．（总结全文）
（B）                                                                  
 Saturday，June 3rd
 I had a wonderful school trip today．（引出下文）I went to a farm which was very big．（交代地点）I did many interesting things there．First，I rode a horse．It was my first time to ride a horse．What an exciting experienceNext，I learned to milk a cow and feed chickens．When I was walking through the field，I saw all kinds of flowers．They were so colorful that I couldn't help taking photos of them．（高分句型一）In the field I saw many farmers working．How hard-working they were!I talked with one of them and learnt a lot from him about farming．（具体叙述图画内容）I had a great time on the farm．I'm looking forward to going there again．（期待下一次来访）（高分句型二）

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